Choice Project Reflection

For my choice project I chose to do a revision. I revised my personal narrative. I made sure that I corrected all of the punctuation and spelling errors. Most importantly I added a new section where I told a singular story in the moment with vivid detail. This choice project reflects to the rest of my portfolio because it really shows off my strengths, such as story telling. I feel like it went well besides that fact that it was late.

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Writer portrait

I am a better writer now than I have ever been in my life. Even though writing has never been my strong suit, I really feel like this English course has developed me into a better writer. This change in writing has occurred because of the constant repetition of writing and a great teacher. My personal narrative was a good experience to write this portrait about. While preparing for my personal narrative I had so many different creative ideas in my head that I had trouble making a decision on what to write about. I wish I had this problem on other writing assignments because I normally struggle to find things to write about. Once I narrowed my topic down to the small town of Thibodaux - I was ready to write. As I was writing this piece, I felt as if words were just flowing through me. Not once while writing that project did I experience writers block. As I wrote t...

Areas that I still need to work on

Some areas that I still need work on are Reading comprehension, organization, and sentence fluency. Reading comprehension has always been a struggle for me. I struggle with putting things that I have read into words. it especially difficult to expressing myself when it comes to the characters quotes. Another area that I still need to work on is my organization skills. When organizing your writing you want to make sure that you even out your quotes, facts, and examples. I struggle with this because I normally end up with way more facts than examples or quotes. I also have a hard time with knowing were to put certain pieces, my facts are very dispersed. Finally, sentence fluency is a area that I have gotten better, but still need work on. I need to work on using different types of sentence structures. A major part of this is repetition. I often find myself repeating the same phrases or words, which could agitating for the reader...

goals for next year

My personal goals for next year are to improve paragraph structure, paraphrasing, and my creative writing techniques. When it comes down to improving paragraphs structures, I tend to have issues organizing what to put in my introduction and conclusion. With my introductions, I tend to put too much context in my beginning. All of my information seems to come out too quickly. I would love to just say enough to get my readers attention and then move on to the next paragraph. With my conclusions, I would like to improve my transitions. I want to lead my readers to want to learn more about the topic I am talking about. I want it to be engaging...not only in the beginning but in the end as well. With paraphrasing, I want to be able to cite properly and portray my ideas through my own words. Also having great punctuation skills and good quoting skills would make me more successful my sophmore year. Lastly, my writing techniques coul...

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